tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6002642382191284824.post7166690832810615768..comments2022-12-11T06:00:19.870-08:00Comments on The Power of the Voice Group 4: Red Scarf Girl, a memoir of the cultural revolution: Marina Dissinger- Literary AnalysisMrs. Hancockhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10574254886261133450noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6002642382191284824.post-30266318027906553332015-03-23T08:01:03.443-07:002015-03-23T08:01:03.443-07:00Marina,
I agree with your response to the questio...Marina, <br />I agree with your response to the question. I really liked how you defined what some of the literary techniques were. I think you could make your post better by adding more in text citations from the book, of examples of the literary techniques. I think you should also add another picture to push our thinking forward.<br />Overall, I thought your post was really good! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6002642382191284824.post-79071859942011086572015-03-23T04:35:59.800-07:002015-03-23T04:35:59.800-07:00Marina,
Great job on your post! I really think it ...Marina,<br />Great job on your post! I really think it was great. It was deep and descriptive, well done! The only thing I think you could improve on, though, is your lack of examples. I think only one example from the novel is too little. If you could add a few more, and describe them and interpret them with as much, maybe even more detail than you have on your current one, your post would greatly improve. It would show more expertise. <br /><br />Overall, great job! I think the picture you chose connected with your post, and you included lots of detail. But you could improve on your examples.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com